There are so many beautiful aspects of this piece, and when I saw it I literally could not stop staring at it. The color pallet is so broad is spectrum, which adds to the beauty and appeal factor, and the expressions of Sasori and Deidara are spot on and fitting for the humorous and cute feeling that this piece gives off. The position of the clay bird confuses me though. I don't know if it is just me, but the angle that it is drawn in looks a bit odd.
Overall, a very eye catching and wonderfully colourful piece, I look forward to seeing more of your new artwork!
I am so Happy To finally give you critique on your wonderful art, Now I hope you Think My Critique's fair!
Now for the picture, sasori and deidara both look adorable! I really loved how you did sasori's annoyed Expression to deidara by using his 'tail' to attack him, he's just that adorable when he's angry!
and I love how you did deidara here! I also got a view of his ass but anyway he's Just as adorable like sasori was! When sasori's tail attacked him deidara's clay bird flew right out of his hand! ( I think that was a Reference to that episode on Rock Lee's Springtime of Youth when deidara slipped on a magazine and his clay bird broke) But I think that's Just me!
But these two are so adorable! You got there personality's right every time! and It feels like there actually arguing!
I hope you enjoy my critique Kaoyux-senpai! and I hope to see more from you In the Future!
Kurai-TamashiFeatured By OwnerJun 16, 2013Student Digital Artist
Hace mucho que no se te miraba un chibi en tu galería, me guuuusta XD Especialmente tu combinación de colores. Aunque tienes muy buenos puntos por las posturas, expresiones y fondo, elementos que son vitales en la composición de un dibujo. Sigue así ^^
lol, the facial expressions xD! poor deidara , but also funny xD! I like it ! hmm... I think a different background would fit better ^^. maybe something blue or funny stuff, but I think the cherry blossoms do not fit quite as good to the foreground. if it helps ^^. maybe it's just a matter of opinion and the cherry blossoms to fit quite well. but I think that rather the cherry blossoms fit to some romantic stuff or the character sakura. and somehow the background looks so cluttered. maybe a little less would fit better ^^.
apologize if something is misspelled or the grammar is not correct. I have to be even better in english . but I hope you understand what I mean. of course your picture looks too good either way, no matter what you had taken for a background ^^. quite apart from that, I could never be as good as you paint or draw .