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IMPRUDENCE - Doujin - ON SALE! by Kaoyux IMPRUDENCE - Doujin - ON SALE! by Kaoyux
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This is the cover of my "IMPRUDENCE" comic.

:new: ON SALE HERE! :new:
:new: ON SALE HERE! :new:
:new: ON SALE HERE! :new:



:bulletpink: DOUJIN INFO :bulletpink:

:pointr: SUMMARY: The story is about Sasori's thoughts and contradictions while he visits Deidara.
:pointr: PAGES: 25 pages (all manga). 4 exclusive manga illustrations will be included ^o^
:pointr: PAIRING: Sasori / Deidara
:pointr: RATING: NOT mature content, just a kiss scene (Shonen-ai)
:pointr: GENRE: Angst mainly / Romantic
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:iconartistichigo:
I love how you did the shadings, and how the picture is expressing itself, through the colours of it.
Also i love how you made the proportions perfectly.
This drawing looks so much like the real Sasori, which impresses me.
It is truly amazing, and i have nothing to critique (Since i would not be able to do it as well ^^; )
Amazing work! I am sure it is loved all over the world! ^^
I will look forward to your next artwork, and i appreciate your work incredibly much.
I will make a pre-order of the doujinshi, as soon as you publish that journal (:
What do you think?
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:iconlaurenloogie:
Wow, this looks fantastic! The colors are warm yet dark, making it look somewhat sinister... I especially like how the robe is colored and textured - it makes me wanna touch it! You captured his facial expression perfectly - stoic and doll-like yet still conveying emotion. The picture flows really well too - the curve of his robe leads the eye all around the page.

The one thing I noticed is his collar bone - it looks a little too distinguished in my opinion. I think that the bone could blend in with the shoulder earlier, and perhaps be a bit lower - just so the ridge of the bone isn't showing against his cloak. Or you could make the curve of his shoulder higher - that would maybe work too. I think that the highlighting you used around there could be a little dimmer too, just near his shoulder. But that aside, fantasic job! You're very talented and I can't wait to see more of your work!
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:iconakatsuki1600:
Akatsuki1600 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
How much this costs?
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:iconkaoyux:
Kaoyux Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
In the artist's comment you can find links and all the info.
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:iconasagiwingeddragon:
AsagiWingedDragon Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
I was looking at this on your page and it does not have the price for this one for the United states. Can you possibly answer this question for me? And would it be in English? o_o very curious but I find your art beautiful and your coloring on this very unique.
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:iconnalakaulitz:
NalaKaulitz Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Student Artist
is he crying blood/anyway nice picture
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:icontwinkies670:
twinkies670 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
Wow thats so cool.I love your art.What computer program do you use to make your art work?PLEASE TELL ME!!!!!!!!
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:iconsasodei1996:
sasodei1996 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
how much it cost? So with shipping to Germany?
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:iconkaoyux:
Kaoyux Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Hi.
Here you are all the info: [link]
just click on the " SHOP | オフ活動" section in the left sidebar and later, below the doujin cover, choose your continent (shipping costs already are included in that final price)
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:iconsasodei1996:
sasodei1996 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012
anigatou
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:icondeiartist922:
deiartist922 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
So...SEXY!
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:icondeiatari01:
deiatari01 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I dont think sasori can get any sexier than that :heart:W:heart::love:
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:iconberukyuros:
Berukyuros Featured By Owner May 21, 2012  Student General Artist
Wonderful ! The drawing, the expression, the colors ... In a word: Perfect ^ ^
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:icongingersnap87:
Gingersnap87 Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful!
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:iconthechildofalyrim:
TheChildOfAlyrim Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think this looks just awesome!!!I mean the colours are fantastic while the shading gives a somehow eerie feeling o_o...The expression is just perfect (no need to even mention it) so yeah...KEEP IT UP!!!
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:icongimmehug:
GimmeHug Featured By Owner May 9, 2012
s..so.. sad... ; n ;
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:icondevimu:
devimu Featured By Owner May 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMADRE QUE MANERA DE PINTAR CARACHO
me fascina su mano, de verdad me parece impecable
pero sus ojos me dan miedo jejeje
siento que esto va a ser increiblemente intenso :"D
si viviera UN POCO MÁS CERCACASCDASDA compraría una para mi y una de reserva por si acaso :iconimhappyplz:
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:iconbloom50:
Bloom50 Featured By Owner May 4, 2012
Oh my..
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:iconaliceheartsinsanity:
AliceHeartsInsanity Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Love it. Can't wait to buy~!
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:iconedainwen:
Edainwen Featured By Owner May 2, 2012
AMAIZING WORK, THE CONSTRAST OF COLOR IN BLACK N RED IS AMAIZING, LOVE THE TECNIQUE N THE FACE YOU DRAW THANKS ALOT FOR SHOW US ♥
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:iconkakashilover11:
kakashilover11 Featured By Owner May 2, 2012  Student General Artist
that is so cool !!!!!!
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:iconjjkmagic-zemyxlover:
JJKMagic-ZemyxLover Featured By Owner May 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome! and still kinda creepy.... o.O

Definitely gonna buy the douji as soon as it's available!^^

Have you found a print shop that will print them for you yet?
From where will you be shipping anyway? (shipping is always so expensive *grumble*)
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:iconkaoyux:
Kaoyux Featured By Owner May 2, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I think I'll do it from USA, Ohio (it's not my country). A friend of mine will send the doujins to people from Ohio.
If I prin them from my country, 50 copies cost me 180 euros and shipping costs from my country 13.05 euros :/
in USA, to print them cost me 50 dollars, shipping costs cheaper as well.... corruption in Europe is so lame...
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:iconjjkmagic-zemyxlover:
JJKMagic-ZemyxLover Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
*le sigh*
Shipping will cost me so much again......
I should definitely move to the US sometime........
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:iconbob-brown:
bob-brown Featured By Owner May 2, 2012
Ah, I like this colouring style (or is it only me who sees it differently from your other works?)
It reminds me of someone's style... But I can't recall who...
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:iconangequilla:
Angequilla Featured By Owner May 2, 2012
beautiful
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:iconmattspintiadams:
MattSpintiAdams Featured By Owner May 1, 2012
Awesome, I love the black tears, they make it look very intriguing
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:iconkaoyux:
Kaoyux Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
oh, since a puppet can't cry, I drew crying his own poison.
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:iconmattspintiadams:
MattSpintiAdams Featured By Owner May 1, 2012
That makes it even awesomer, I know it's not a word, but in this case it works for how cool your stuff is, but seriously, thats got to be the best idea ever!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconxxdarkestrosexx:
xXDarkestRoseXx Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconworshipplz:
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:iconwerewolfninja96:
werewolfninja96 Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow this is AWESOME i love the dark feel it gives and yet still gives a light/warm feeling while still keeping the darker side of sasori present <3 i love art work like this
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:icontalonart:
TalonArt Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Student General Artist
Love it....;_;
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:iconredheadmaniac:
redheadmaniac Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
sexeh! :heart:
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:iconawesomeduskangel:
AwesomeDuskAngel Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Hobbyist
Epic :la:
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:iconcaspermycat2:
caspermycat2 Featured By Owner May 1, 2012
wow amazing
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:iconmarcelineteen:
MarcelineTeen Featured By Owner May 1, 2012
Hot,so very hot,but is this a yaoi kind of thing? And exactly what is a Doujinshi? Some kind of manga?
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:iconkaoyux:
Kaoyux Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
thanky very much :hug:
Oh, yes, all the info is written in the artist's comment box
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:iconmarcelineteen:
MarcelineTeen Featured By Owner May 1, 2012
No prob. :iconninjaglompplz: Dayuuum,that Sassy drawing was so..:iconnosebleedplz:
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:iconthe-forgotten-one-4:
the-forgotten-one-4 Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Love it! Very emotional
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:iconkaoyux:
Kaoyux Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
thanku very much :hug:
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:iconthe-forgotten-one-4:
the-forgotten-one-4 Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
you are very welcome!! I love all your work...well what i've seen of it ^^; I only recently turned eighteen and haven't gotten the opportunity to see some of the stuff on your site.
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:iconociosa:
ociosa Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
esta geniaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaal m encanta!!!! en especial los colores que le haz puesto
los ojos esos tan dorados como que se ven un poco perversos, y artificiales, como si se notara el reflejo de una vela :)
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:iconkaoyux:
Kaoyux Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
los ojos estan dorados porque en los pocos fanarts que lo he visto con ojos dorados ME PONE. Y estan iluminados, no por una vela, sino por él mismo, es como una portada abstracta que muestra sus sentimientos y ganas de f*llar :iconkruemelplz:
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:iconociosa:
ociosa Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
kukukukuku pobre sasori ;) oe cuando tengas el dou me das las instrucciones para depositarte el envio por paypal :)
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:iconlovegunnermoongoddes:
LoveGunnerMoonGoddes Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Me lovey. 8D

but isn't eye-bleeding Itachi's thing? XD
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:iconkaoyux:
Kaoyux Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
it's not blood, but poisson
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:iconlovegunnermoongoddes:
LoveGunnerMoonGoddes Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
AHHHHH.

Now it's symbolic! 8D XD
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:iconzahrahinamori:
zahrahinamori Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Student
just one word amazing just amazing :)
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:iconkaoyux:
Kaoyux Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
thanku very much :hug:
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:iconzahrahinamori:
zahrahinamori Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Student
dont mention it
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:iconuseflamethrower:
UseFlamethrower Featured By Owner May 1, 2012
Cost?
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:iconkaoyux:
Kaoyux Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I can't know it yet because it will depend on how much the printing costs will be. When all is ready I'll submit the full cover with samples and all the necesary info :)
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