What do you think I should improve the most in my doujins? ( Here you are an example of my most recent doujin pages: http://ireal.web.fc2.com/deidaras_striptease_doujinshi.htm )
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Nothing, all it's fine for me :)
Anatomy / Expressions / Lineart :O_o:
Poses / Perspectives :eyepopping:
The use of those manga-Patterns / manga- ScreenTones :dohtwo:
Distribution of Panel lines / Frames in the page / the form of speech Balloons :sprint:
The Dynamics of the story / The flat way you distribute the story in the panels :dizzy:
Other [plz, comment, don't panic, I'll be very glateful to read your suggestions, seriously] :confused:

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Fieyasan's avatar
he votado por que esta todo bien xD
por lo menos en ese doujin
la verdad es que haces planos bastante interesantes y la perspectiva esta muy bien
las expresiones estan genialees, las clavas
y las tramas usas un monton y bien usadas y eso hace que no quede tan plano
no se, yo pienso que te sale super bien y a ellos dos los dibujas super bien =)