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What do you think I should improve the most in my doujins? ( Here you are an example of my most recent doujin pages: http://ireal.web.fc2.com/deidaras_striptease_doujinshi.htm )
406 votes
Nothing, all it's fine for me
Anatomy / Expressions / Lineart
Poses / Perspectives
The use of those manga-Patterns / manga- ScreenTones :dohtwo:
Distribution of Panel lines / Frames in the page / the form of speech Balloons
The Dynamics of the story / The flat way you distribute the story in the panels
Other [plz, comment, don't panic, I'll be very glateful to read your suggestions, seriously]
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he votado por que esta todo bien xD
por lo menos en ese doujin
la verdad es que haces planos bastante interesantes y la perspectiva esta muy bien
las expresiones estan genialees, las clavas
y las tramas usas un monton y bien usadas y eso hace que no quede tan plano
no se, yo pienso que te sale super bien y a ellos dos los dibujas super bien
por lo menos en ese doujin
la verdad es que haces planos bastante interesantes y la perspectiva esta muy bien
las expresiones estan genialees, las clavas
y las tramas usas un monton y bien usadas y eso hace que no quede tan plano
no se, yo pienso que te sale super bien y a ellos dos los dibujas super bien